User blog:Gojiran/First Episode of the Sprite Comic Series

Title says all. If those that I did not tell don't know, I started a sprite comic series and this is my first "episode", but I'd really call this an introduction. I will say that mid-way after Jotaro's scene I wasn't trying too hard because I got sleepy. But I finished it, so here it is. Please, give me any thoughts on this introduction of sorts. I'd love to hear what were your favorite parts, what you think of what was shown, etc. in the comments below. Next episode coming out pretty soon. Peace!